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I wrote a poem earlier, I want to hear your thoughts about it, what title do you think suits it? I'm open to criticisms!
Did I hold you too loose or too tight?
Either way, I lost you
You're no longer in my sight
I started to feel blue.
My head is all clouded
Everything seems to be a blur
I would always space out, preoccupied
I wish there is a cure.
Nothing makes sense
Destruction lingers in mind
I couldn't help but feel dense
It feels like I was almost blind.
I started to embrace singularity
While trying to keep my sanity
I may have lost you
But I don't want to lose myself too.
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wow, you are too good. this has a feel in it.... loved it.. <3
ReplyThank you so much!
Replydo write more. you are actually good in this<3
Replyi mean, you are happy, right?
ReplyI couldn't exactly say that I'm happy but I'm certainly fine
Replyokay... good to hear that u are fine..
Replycan i ask u something? is this something related to u personally?
ReplyYes
Replysorry, i didnt get u? i was asking the poet... but do u want to say something dear...
ReplyYes, there are times when I couldn't express myself so I write down my thoughts through poems or paragraphs and even stories
ReplyJust call it "lost you"
ReplyI love it 🥰🥰
ReplyThank you!!
Replywow.....
ReplyLove it. Makes me think of Ozzy Osbourne (especially solo career) lyrics.
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