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Idk if this is as good as the poem i posted before but here it is:
Sweet Night
You heard my silent cries
You witnessed my painful nights
You felt the warmth in my cold touch
You never left my side.
Are you still there and listening?
It's hard to drift off to sleep
My mind keeps wondering.
Am I good enough to keep?
Sorry if you had to see my misery
Thanks for keeping me accompany
For putting my mind at ease
And giving me a goodnight kiss.
I know one day I'll wake up with a smile
When I am not in need anymore
No longer feeling vile
Are you going to leave me?
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