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I think one of my biggest problems (besides motivation) when writing (for school) is keeping my essays normal. I sound so stuffy. I don't know what to do. I mean, if some fancy word works best for the sentence, then I'm going to use it. And I phrase all my sentences to be super frilly. I hate it.
"Steinbeck openly says the pearl directly causes the morality of people to rot. This happens to Kino too, for he prepares for violence. All he hears is faint “music of evil,” and his knife is at the ready. It turns out Kino was correct in preparing for violence, for someone tries to steal the pearl. Nevertheless, this is the start of Kino’s moral decline. "
... What the hell? Why is it like this? Why do I write like this? I hate it. It's just an essay for school, and I sound like an 80-year-old snot from the 16th century. I'm not submitting it like this, but my whole ESSAY is like this shi t.
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