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I will tell you a story in the most brief manner possible....Then tell me whether it's karma that happened before you made your first selfish decision.
I'll name this life, "Karma Hits First"
Here's the story....Imagine it as your life.
Your life starts in a poor neighborhood, as the first and only child in your family...You have parents who abuses substances, and your parents fight physically/verbally every day. You learn curse words as a toddler...You turn 5 years old, and your alcoholic father chokes your mother and she passes away. Your father gets arrested, and you're put in foster care.
You get adopted the same year...you're adopted into a strict family.
They make you press their clothes since age 5....and they make you make meals at age 8 for the entire family....They throw away their paper shredder and make you cross out names and tear paper by hand....There's always a pile of mails of your parents and their previous roommates who never changed their address. They don't even allow you to put your hands in your pockets during the cold, and you're forced to walk outside in the dead winter without any jacket on....You freeze and shiver, you fall ill...you feel like that's a heavy training for a kid. It almost feels like you're in an army, you're never close to them....You have no child hood and you feel lonely, no toys...You go to an army school, no one to talk to...beaten and not allowed to go out other than that. Your life has never been easy as a kid.
You get into your teen years, you make a friend from your training classes. You are now 16, and everyone knows how close you two are. Your friend goes missing, she's kidnapped. You are called, the kidnapper calls you and is someone who knows you in person. He emotionally blackmails you into doing things that makes you feel uncomfortable and you have to do it or else your friend's life is in danger. You are brainwashed into keeping this a secret, you start paying him so that he doesn't sxually abuse you in that way anymore. Your friend is missing, and the case is closed due to insufficient evidence. Only you know where she is....But she is one day abused so badly that she dies due to immense bleeding. You feel guilty and responsible for your death, you feel selfish for only paying for you.
You fall into depression and you don't know what to do, you start self harming and become suicidal, feeling responsible for her death....But you can't tell anyone. This continues for months and then almost a year.
This is an idea of mine to write a short story, lol...Should I change the problem? I don't know what new characters to add or how to end the story....Maybe I'll make her kill herself and end the novel by describing how her blood leaks to the river that was under the bridge she and her friend were kidnapped...and the story ends.
Or maybe the main character becomes pregnant, is kicked out of home but the family doesn't know why she was pregnant in the first place....And she is homeless and dies of the cold/weakness after she gives birth....and the story ends with the baby crying
Basically the main part of the story is the main character being emotionally blackmailed and her knowing that her friend is kidnapped. How should this story end?
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