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So I wrote a song. I think its good, but I dont know...some feedback please? It's supposed to be about anxiety and being bullied, but I dont know if you can tell, I used a lot of metaphors, like flying away and going to Mars. Well, here it is, and I hope you like it. :)
One day, I'm gonna go to Mars
And sleep under the stars
I wanna go to Mars
One day, I'm gonna get away
From all the things they say
I wanna get away
One day, I'm gonna know the truth
And fly away from you
I just wanna know the truth
One day, I'm gonna be okay
I'll ignore the things they say
I only wanna be okay
One day, I'll stand up for myself
Burn those pictures off the shelf
And I'll stand up for myself
Oh yea-ah
I wanna go to Mars
And sleep under the stars
I wanna get away
From all the things they say
I wanna know the truth
And fly away from you
I wanna be okay
And ignore the things they say
I wanna stand up for myself
Burn your picture off my shelf
But the most important thing I wanna do
Is get away from you
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Yes this is good!
ReplyThat's really good !! :)
Replyaw thanks
ReplySong lyrics that has such a beautiful yet sad meaning to it is..is just heartwarming really, the part where you say "I just wanna know the truth" reminds me of how the person wants to know 'why?' the people treat him/her the way they do (just my interpretation), and you say you wanna fly away to Mars, and I just found out that the symbolism behind Mars also means confronting the deepest dark truths about yourself, Wow.
Replyim glad you understood the meaning of the sing, this comment really warmed my heart. thank you for liking my lyrics. ill be posting another one (hopefully) tonight. maybe you could check that one out too?
ReplyDefinitely!! I'd love to! :)
Replythanks. ill post it soon
ReplyI just posted it. It's called, "Does this ever happen to you?".
ReplyI posted a new one, if youre interested. its called Dust
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