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hey this is a poem i wrote about my feelings, read it and comment down feedback and if you relate :)
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when i was 4 i was put into swimming lessons,
i loved the art of floating,
i loved the control,
i loved it.
When i was 14 i began drowning,
i hated it,
i still hate it,
but there are times when i love the pain,
i hated it more than i loved it.
ive been underwater for a long time,
i cant breathe but then i love that i cant breathe,
i screamed for help but i started admiring the bubbles,
now my lungs are filled with water,
and the cuts on my wrist have reopened,
the pain felt good but the hurt felt like i was dying
inches away from grim reaper,
as he reaches for my soul i give in happily.
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Why not write a happy poem?
Replyi will once i’m happy
ReplySuch raw emotions , loved it ! You totally nailed the feelings you went through. Much love.
ReplyIt's so admirable that you have acquired the knack to put your genuine feelings to paper. I have a passion for poetry as well, some of which I have posted here as well.
Hope you keep on writing!
ReplyIt gives me an insight to everyone’s life. It brings imagery to my head! You’ve written so well! Keep writing.
Have a great day!❤️
ReplyThat's so nice. All the pain and happiness in that pain.
ReplyI feel it.....it really suits me....
This pain suits me
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