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So years ago, I wrote this story about two characters who were around 15-16 years old that learn that they’re having a baby. The girlfriend’s family is middle class I guess and the boyfriend’s family is very rich, almost like royalty.
So in the original version, I wrote that they get married and the girlfriend now lives with the boyfriend’s family so they can raise their child together. But since I’m rewriting it, I don’t want that to happen. I want them to get married when they’re a little older, but I’m not sure how the two will raise the baby together.
I don’t really want neither of their parents kicking them out and having the other live in the other’s home 😅 so I’m not too sure what to do
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Even though the girl has the baby at her parent's house both her and his parents don't like the idea of them marrying because his snobby parents have their eyes on a daughter of their rich friends for him. Then her family doesn't want anything to do with these rich snobby people. The boy and girl make plans to tun away from school and their homes together with the baby so that they can stay together and plan to later marry. The boy steals money from his dad's wallet and money from his mother's bag including his parent's credit cards and the girl does the same. The girl's parents have bought her a pram for the baby so very late at night when everyone is asleep they make their getaway. He meets her at her front gate and on foot they take off. They each have a bag full of their clothes and they make their way to the bus station.
Now your imagination comes into play as you say where they go and if they somehow get a roof over their heads or live in the streets. Whichever way you can have them dodging welfare and police and knowing that their parents would have given their photos to the police they are being careful to hide and even disguise themselves. They meet different people like an elderly woman who harasses them for money, a young mother whose baby died and tries to steal their baby, and teens like themselves who want them to join them for a fun time. You write about how this young couple deal with these people as the story goes along. Write about how they use their parent's money and credit cards for baby formula, bottles, diapers, and clothes for their growing baby. You need a synopsis which is an outline of the story that you intend to write, and this is what I have done if you want to go along these lines. Remember that you are writing for the reader and not yourself. I won't write any more in case I get so carried away that I write a whole story or even a novel. Best of luck.
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