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I’m trying to rewrite a story I wrote that involves a powerful crystal that can grant any kind of wish, good or bad. But, I want it to be better and without plot holes. Like, I still want the crystal to work and be powerful if it’s broken into separate pieces, but I also somehow want the princess in the story to be corrupted or hypnotized by the villains using the crystal
Basically in the original story, the villains arrive in the kingdom to take it over, but spot the Crystal in the throne room and threaten the princess’s servant’s life if she doesn’t tell them what it does. Later on the main villain breaks the Crystal into different pieces so that the rest of his gang can use it. And in the end once the heroes have all the pieces and the villains are defeated, the princess wishes for the Crystal to disappear
I could really use some help 😅 I’ve been frustrated since yesterday trying to come up with stuff to improve this story
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i'm no expert in stories and not sure if this is any help to you but what i would do is think more of how the environment in your story looks like and what you could add to it so you can try to connect the scenes to your story if that makes sense.
For example, maybe you can imagine a room filled with crystals and come up with your own story based on that room.
hope this helps.
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