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I have seen Heaven,
and it has no Golden Gates,
but Golden Locks flowing in the wind,
no shining bright light,
but a loving smile,
no clear blue skies,
but deep blue eyes.
I have seen Heaven,
and called her mine.
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Okay, i just read your first poem, too. So, you are expressing your emotions for this girl, right? I am only gonna say two things. One, your words are exceptionally beautiful. And two, i hope you focus on both the sides of her. Not only what she depicts on the outside. Knowing people on the inside is the only way you can ever truly love them
ReplyHi, thank you for reading my first two poems. I appreciate it a lot.
Yes, I am. We used to have a relationship, but almost three years ago now she made the choice this life was not for her. These words are about the dream I had two nights ago, where I was with her again and it was the best I have ever felt, and will ever feel. It was Heaven. Thank you again.
ReplyNo worries :)
Am sorry, but by deciding this life was not for her, what do you mean? If it is what am thinking, am really very sorry to ask
ReplyHi,
It is indeed what you think it is. She had been admitted for a few months but that didn't work either, unfortunately.
ReplyI wish i had the right words to help you, so just know that, even though i don't know you at all, am sure you loved her with your whole heart. I am not really a person who often prays to God, but i'll surely ensure that she is in my prayers today. And i also hope that you get some peace. Also, if you want to talk about it, i am all ears
ReplyThank you, again :) I still have a love letter of hers in my room, so she is always with me :) I hope you are well. <3
ReplyThat's awesome :)
Thanks, you too!
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