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Hey, Novni gang. Could you help me decide which of these sound scarier and piques your interest? If you have any writing tips, please let me know.
1. An isolating silence paralyzed us when images of a digitized, world order seized our minds. The fated flight of a future calculated a bleak utopia, hard-earned and blazing with conformity. To have been alone with the foreign memories betrayed every fiber of our free will.
2. Fogged rays cast away the cold air of her humbled pleas. To the window’s grave horizons, her trembling curse fastens her wrists. Yet nothing snatches the former prisoner to silence but the sight-scraping scan of the glass’ radiant intelligence. Grids creep every fiber of her being, betraying her trust.
3. An isolating silence cast away the cold air of her humbled pleas with a digitized, world order seizing our minds. The flight of fate generated a bleak utopia, hard-earned and blazing with conformity. To have been alone with the foreign memories betrayed every fiber of her free will.
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Hey, Novni gang. Could you help me decide which of these sound scarier and piques your interest? If you have any writing tips, please let me know. 1. An isolat...
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ReplyI'm a writer and I'm actually struggling to understand what you're trying to say with any of these. can't work out if they're descriptions, or the start of a plot, or who the characters are. It's like you've used so much descriptive diction that it's actually become meaningless. You have to strike the balance between the mysterious, eerie description - but also clarity, because that's what enables the reader to picture it (and that imagining is what makes it so scary). The readers have to have a clear mental image of what you're describing.
ReplyJust to add - I don't think this is bad. You certainly have a talent for picking the right descriptors. I just feel like you need to balance it with clarity too, and not have every single phrase being a literary technique. But I like it, and I'd encourage you to keep writing this sort of stuff!
ReplyThanks a lot! Your feedback is very helpful!
ReplyAs before I think you ought to combine it all.
ReplyOkay, thanks for the helpful advice again!
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