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I love you
Hey, i love you. i know you think ive been saying it as a friend.. but i really do! you make me happy in ways that ______ never could. i wanna share things with...
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Death to My Stalker’s
Tell me something grand, Because I’m so profoundly paranoid, Because I cannot rest my racing thoughts, And because my stomach twists when I panic. Tell...
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this town
a poem inspired by the song i lay under the stars and think i think about how we once danced here and now i’m alone. i made a mistake that mista...
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Dust
Soooo, here's another song. This one is called Dust and it's about having fights with my friends. So, um, I hope you like it, and could you give me some feedbac...
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Mars
So I wrote a song. I think its good, but I dont know...some feedback please? It's supposed to be about anxiety and being bullied, but I dont know if you can tel...
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a poem I wrote that I wanna share...
I wrote this a year ago and wanna hear if you like or dislike it and why. It’s called helpless. As I laid with my childhood in my arms You waited for me...
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Your dearest posion.
I am a toxin most effective, A single touch to become infected I bring only disease and misfortune, I bid you to stay away, For this tongue of mine is far to...
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How could we - a poem
Why above all does our fear of death prevail Perhaps we’ve been tricked For why fear the end of the good when what comes with is it the end of the horrid...
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Lilys
this is a poem i wrote about how i feel staying inside, ive never wrote poetry before but i want to post it and express it. if anyone has feedback or tips pleas...
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Purpose
So there is this writing competition about purpose at my University(UT Austin hook 'em!) and was wanting to receive feedback on it. I appreciate pure honesty. I...