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a little poem about depression and the way to recovery, its bad, i know, sorry, its a way of aligning my thoughts.
3 years ago · 2 · Depression, +3
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Iit doesnt rhyme, i tried focussing on rythm first, i even tried to change the rythm to a more upbeat pace at the end, i dont think i succeeded though.
Screaming at a mountain
will never make it move
ignoring it won't help at al
it wont move on it's own
how will it move over
if i can't tear it down
all effort proves uncapable
of flattening this height
I don't have the courage
to climb up there again
my head felt really wavery
my heart was short on time
Trying to defy it
i almost lost myself
this mountain took my will to live
it took my joy away
after all this fighting
Im ready to give up
it's never gonna disappear
Ill have to live with that
But low and behold
a stranger came
he brought a spark of hope
and showed what's the truth
the mountain i feared
deceived the eye
it was no solid stone
they were pebbles stuck in shape
a human can't lift
a stone that big
unless it's fractionized
and you lift it piece by piece
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ReplyThis is good. I like the way you depict the mountain as the depression.
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